Undense the birmingHack paragraph

Author: Thatsmusic99

_collections/_news/2025-06-24-year-in-review-2025.md

@@ -71,28 +71,16 @@ general food breaks for breakfast, lunch and dinner.
 ![A photo of UG04 and attendees working on their projects.](/assets/images/2025-end-of-year-newsletter/birminghack-ug04.jpg)
 
 There were several memorable projects submitted with different purposes, inspirations and skill levels, that all reflected
-the individual teams that pulled everything together. Some teams focused on projects that would help others, such as
-Speaking With Claire, developed by a team whose first language wasn't English, but required to pass an English exam to
-enter university; No Room For Doom, an online healthcare service for citizens in Sudan, a country heavily torn by war
-and has a lack of healthcare services available; and of course, Too Bad To Keep, a response to the ongoing bin strikes
-in Birmingham where drivers can collect waste from those who cannot dump it at a landfill, and get paid for it. There were
-some more light-hearted games developed alongside those projects, such as Clunks Foundation Creation (very on the nose, 
-guys), Notable and Secret Sandwich Service, in addition to the Spinning Raps, of which won CSS' own category for
-most fun hack! And of course, there was a significant focus on AI within some projects, with Neuphonic providing their
-platform for free to all birmingHack participants and AlgoSoc hosting its AI hack category, which produced some incredibly
-interesting results - SocratEase and Ocular are two of these projects, where SocratEase would turn speech videos of
-yourself into feedback provided by AI, and Ocular used facial detection at your front door to ask those coming to your
-house who was visiting, their purpose of visiting, and whether it recognised that person from an existing contact. Two
-other projects that won prizes include StudySync, which connects students to study together, and Guess the Voice, which
-used Neuphonic's API to use celebrity voices, but also won in GDS' category for being the most user-friendly project.
-
-And of course, there's two extra projects that were special in their own ways altogether, of which were ThatsAwkward and
-none other than FLOORPLAN. ThatsAwkward was a project entirely built by conversion students, who learned absolutely
-*everything* (Git, APIs, Flask, etc.) within the 24 hours, and produced an incredible project that defied expectations.
-And of course, there's also FLOORPLAN, of which won the very first iteration of birmingHack and additionally Majestic's
-category for the "Surprise Us!" category. They also let us know that they got published in the [SIGBOVIK proceedings](https://sigbovik.org/2025/proceedings.pdf)
-for 2025 with FLOORPLAN! Including acknowledges to birmingHack for organising the events, then retracting those acknowledgements
-over their loss of sleep.
+the individual teams that pulled everything together. Some teams focused on projects that would help others, others worked
+on more lighthearted games that were quirky and fun, and others created some incredibly impressive AI projects, given
+only 24 hours was provided to work on each team's project. However, there were two projects that were special in their own 
+ways, of which were ThatsAwkward and none other than FLOORPLAN. ThatsAwkward was a project entirely built by conversion 
+students, who learned absolutely*everything* (Git, APIs, Flask, etc.) within the 24 hours, and produced an incredible 
+project that defied expectations. And of course, there's also FLOORPLAN, of which won the inaugural birmingHack and 
+additionally Majestic's category for the "Surprise Us!" category. They also let us know that they got published in the 
+[SIGBOVIK proceedings](https://sigbovik.org/2025/proceedings.pdf) for 2025 with FLOORPLAN!
+
+If you want to see some of the other projects that were submitted, you can see them here: <https://birminghack.devpost.com/project-gallery>
 
 ![A group photo of attendees at the end of birmingHack.](/assets/images/2025-end-of-year-newsletter/birminghack-group.jpg)
 
@@ -109,8 +97,6 @@ early next year, around the time of October/November.
 Thank you to each and every committee member of CSS who helped make this event possible - and thank you as well to Adam,
 an external volunteer from hackSheffield who eagerly volunteered to help ensure the event went smoothly!
 
-If you want to see some of the other projects that were submitted, you can see them here: <https://birminghack.devpost.com/project-gallery>
-
 # Outside of Events - Discord and Minecraft
 
 We've also been working on things for you to do outside of term time - whether you need time to kill or want to reconnect