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_posts/2025-07-28-sgmde-patch.markdown

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This is a lab mem story that could have been.
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Welcome to the Delta Attractor Field! Here you’ll get to enjoy some good time with the STEINS;GATE cast, and explore many possibilities.
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Welcome to the Delta Attractor Field! Here, you’ll get to enjoy some good time with the STEINS;GATE cast and explore many possibilities.
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Just like Phenogram, My Darling’s Embrace is a very similar game to the original STEINS;GATE, and so it also shares features with it. On the language side, it had a better base than Phenogram, but still needed a full on check, especially on terminology.
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Just like Phenogram, My Darling’s Embrace is a very similar game to the original STEINS;GATE, so it also shares features with it. On the language side, it had a better base than Phenogram, but it still needed a full-on check, especially its terminology.
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Now go ahead, and adjust the divergence to any value *you*’d like.
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Now, go ahead and adjust the divergence to any value *you*’d like.
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<div style="border: 1px solid #fff; padding: 8px;">
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Download link and instructions are <a href="#installation">↓ below</a>.
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##### Bug fixes
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Fixed two bugs related to the phone, one where an interactive email's hitbox was going for too long, and another where the phone would pop in and pop out every few lines during a video call.
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Fixed two bugs related to the phone: one where an interactive email's hitbox ran too long, and another where the phone would pop in and pop out every few lines during a video call.
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##### Translated CGs
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Translated a number of CGs and BGs, as well as fixed some terminology and typesetting errors present in other images.
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Translated a number of CGs and BGs; also fixed some terminology and typesetting errors present in other images.
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##### Better typography
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_posts/2025-07-28-sgvso-patch.markdown

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Experience this STEINS;GATE afterstory in 8-bit!
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Unexpected as it is, we patched this very niche entry, as it contains a lot of interesting setup for the series overarching science, as well as a few references to the CHAOS;HEAD entries. We also tried to make it less annoying to set up.
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Unexpected as it is, we patched this very niche entry, as it contains a lot of interesting setup for the series's overarching science, as well as a few references to the CHAOS;HEAD entries. We also tried to make it less annoying to set up.
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Enjoy this short sequel in a known yet different world…
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##### Point of view selection
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##### Point-of-view selection
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You can choose to play in first person, like the game was written in, or in second person, the more traditional way for the genre in the west. Use the in-game configuration to select the mode.
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You can choose to play in first person, like the game was written in, or in second person, the more traditional way for the genre in the West. Use the in-game configuration to select the mode.
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By upgrading the game from krkr2 to krkrz, we made it so that you don’t need to change your locale anymore. You can now enjoy the game with less headache. Also we provided more resolution settings, available in the in-game configuration.
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By upgrading the game from krkr2 to krkrz, we made it so that you don’t need to change your locale anymore. You can now enjoy the game with less headache. Also, we provided more resolution settings, available in the in-game configuration.
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# <a name="installation"></a>Installation instructions
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#### Work in progress
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- **[CHAOS;HEAD Love Chu☆Chu! Fan-translation and Ports]({{ "/2025/07/28/committee-of-zero-progress-update-12.html" | relative_url }})**
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- **[CHAOS;CHILD Love Chu☆Chu!! Fan-translation and Ports]({{ "/2025/07/28/committee-of-zero-progress-update-12.html" | relative_url }})**
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- **[CHAOS;HEAD Love Chu☆Chu! Fan translation and Ports]({{ "/2025/07/28/committee-of-zero-progress-update-12.html" | relative_url }})**
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- **[CHAOS;CHILD Love Chu☆Chu!! Fan translation and Ports]({{ "/2025/07/28/committee-of-zero-progress-update-12.html" | relative_url }})**
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- Switch Patches
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- [CHAOS;CHILD Improvement Patch]({{ "/projects/chaoschild-steam.html" | relative_url }})
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<img style="width: 16px; height: 16px; margin: auto;" src="{{ "/assets/plat-icon-switch.svg" | relative_url }}">

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