Update astro/src/content/docs/general/data-protection.md

Co-authored-by: Maarten Balliauw <maarten.balliauw@duendesoftware.com>

Author: ProgrammerAL

astro/src/content/docs/general/data-protection.md

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-Any Duende server-side application like IdentityServer of BFF is developed and deployed as an ASP.NET Core application. While there are a lot of decisions to make, this also means that your implementation can be built, deployed, hosted, and managed with the same technology you're using for any other ASP.NET applications you have. 
+Any Duende server-side application, like IdentityServer or BFF, is developed and deployed as an ASP.NET Core application. While there are a lot of decisions to make, this also means that your implementation can be built, deployed, hosted, and managed with the same technology you're using for any other ASP.NET applications you have. 
 
-One important aspect to include in your application is around Data Protection.
+It is important to correctly configure ASP.NET Core Data Protection i your application.
 
 :::note
 Some of our most common support requests are related to [Data Protection Keys](#data-protection-keys), so we strongly encourage you to review the rest of this page before deploying to production.