Update english.dl

Author: PretzelWeaver

localization/english.dl

@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ english:
   tips.menu.returngame : "[lbutton]Exit menu"
   tips.menu.restart : "[lbutton]Abandon current game\n - Start a new game with current deck"
   tips.menu.startmenu : "[lbutton]Return to start menu\n - Save current progress"
-  tips.menu.restart_confirm : "[lbutton]Confirm to abandon current game"
+  tips.menu.restart_confirm : "[lbutton]Confirm to abandon the current game"
   tips.menu.erasegame : "[lbutton]Erase current game\n - You can restart a new campaign from start"
-  tips.menu.erasegame_confirm : "[lbutton]Confirm to erase current game"
+  tips.menu.erasegame_confirm : "[lbutton]Confirm to erase the current game"
   tips.menu.exit : "[lbutton]Exit game"
   tips.menu.start : "[lbutton]Start game"
   tips.menu.newgame : "[lbutton]New campaign"
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ english:
   desc.tech.discard : "This card created in era ${era} is complete and can be used in the following phases:\n${adv1_discard}\n${adv2_discard}\n${adv3_discard}"
   desc.text.hand.tech : "This card created in era ${era} still has room for advancement. Advancement abilities of incomplete ${type} in hand cannot be used until this card is completed.\n\n$(desc.text.hand)"
   desc.text.hand.civ : "It's the winning civlization ${name} of era ${era}, The homeworld ${world} of this civilization is at the sector[sector] ${sector}.\n\nAt the phase [blue]$(phase.action)[n] : If you control the sector [sector] ${sector}, Choose [blue]$(action.evoke)[n] action:\n - ${victory}\n - ${advancement}\n\n$(desc.text.hand)"
-  desc.text.homeworld.world.desc : "It represents your homeworld [blue]${name}[n], $(plant.era), located in sector [blue]${sector}[n].\n\nOnce you lose control of the sector containing your homeworld, you must promote a colony to homeworld. Having no other colonies at that time will result in game failure.\n\n$(desc.payment)\n\n${adv1}${adv2|}${adv3|}"
+  desc.text.homeworld.world.desc : "It represents your homeworld, [blue]${name}[n], located in sector [blue]${sector}[n]. $(plant.era).\n\nIf you lose all cubes in the sector with your homeworld, discard it and choose another world from your tableau in a different sector to replace it. You lose the game if you are unable to replace your homeworld.\n\n$(desc.payment)\n\n${adv1}${adv2|}${adv3|}"
   desc.text.homeworld.world : "$(desc.text.homeworld.world.desc)\n\nThis world can be advanced. To win the game, you need advance 3 times.\n\n$(desc.payment)\n\n${adv1}${adv2|}${adv3|}"
   desc.text.homeworld.world.complete : "$(desc.text.homeworld.world.desc)\n\n$(desc.payment)\n\n${adv1}${adv2|}${adv3|}"
   desc.payment : "Because this card has [blue]${payment}[n] type advancement, you can avoid challenges and produce [cube] during [blue]$(phase.payment)[n] phase by discarding hand cards with ${payment} markers. [cube] can counter negative effects from ${payment} type challenges during [blue]$(phase.challenge)[n] phase."
@@ -280,9 +280,9 @@ english:
   desc.text.colony.world.complete : "$(desc.text.colony.world)"
   desc.text.neutral.world : "It represents [blue]${name}[n], a neutral [planet] world in sector [blue]${sector}[n]. $(plant.era).\n\nOnce you control sector ${sector}, you may $(action.settle) this world.\n\nAfter settling a neutral [planet] world, you may immediately take a free [blue]$(action.power)[n] and a free [blue]$(action.advance)[n] action for completing the conquest of a rival civilization."
   desc.text.neutral.world.complete : "$(desc.text.neutral.world)"
-  desc.adv1:"• [blue]${adv1_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv1_era}) can be used in [blue]${adv1_stage}[n] phase: ${adv1_desc}\n\n"
-  desc.adv2:"• [blue]${adv2_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv2_era}) can be used in [blue]${adv2_stage}[n] phase: ${adv2_desc}\n\n"
-  desc.adv3:"• [blue]${adv3_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv3_era}) can be used in [blue]${adv3_stage}[n] phase: ${adv3_desc}\n\n"
+  desc.adv1:"• [blue]${adv1_name}[n] (gained in era ${adv1_era}) can augment a [blue]${adv1_stage}[n] action: ${adv1_desc}\n\n"
+  desc.adv2:"• [blue]${adv2_name}[n] (gained in era ${adv2_era}) can augment a [blue]${adv2_stage}[n] action: ${adv2_desc}\n\n"
+  desc.adv3:"• [blue]${adv3_name}[n] (gained in era ${adv3_era}) can augment a [blue]${adv3_stage}[n] action: ${adv3_desc}\n\n"
   desc.adv1.discard:"• [blue]${adv1_stage}[n]: Can activate [blue]${adv1_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv1_era}): ${adv1_desc}"
   desc.adv2.discard:"• [blue]${adv2_stage}[n]: Can activate [blue]${adv2_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv2_era}): ${adv2_desc}"
   desc.adv3.discard:"• [blue]${adv3_stage}[n]: Can activate [blue]${adv3_name}[n] (advancement gained in era ${adv3_era}): ${adv3_desc}"