mdx edit

Author: davidlyons

src/content/work/within.mdx

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-title: Within WebVR
+title: WITHIN WebVR
 pubDate: 2018-08-17 00:00:00 PST
 img: /work/within/thumb.jpg
 img_alt: 360 video gallery
@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ tags:
 
 Responsible for user interface elements, including cylindrical paginated thumbnail grid, video
 detail view with play and back buttons, video player controls with replay, play / pause, resolution
-and back buttons, and timeline seek bar. The text is rendered with signed distance field bitmap
-fonts . I also added support for stereoscopic VR headsets with the WebVR API and added supported for
-VR controllers with the Gamepad API.
+and back buttons, and timeline seek bar, text rendered with signed distance field bitmap fonts,
+support for stereoscopic VR headsets with the WebVR API and support for VR controllers with the
+Gamepad API.
 
 ![Thumbnail grid](/work/within/gallery.jpg)