Merge pull request #45 from devansXD/jill-ur-updates

Jill UR-informed updates to homepage

Updates made after a sweep of user research and team discussion at end of alpha, including an overall reduction of text (condensing benefits copy and removing redundant sections) and accuracy checks (e.g. NICE HealthTech instead of Medtech).

Author: jillru

app/views/current/homepage.html

@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">What this service offers</h2>
     <div class="nhsuk-card nhsuk-card--clickable">
       <div class="nhsuk-card__content">
         <h3 class="nhsuk-card__heading nhsuk-heading-s">Centralised evidence</h3>
-        <p>Access multiple trusted sources in one place, including NICE Medtech Guidance, ODEP Accreditation, 
-            NHS Trust Evaluations and MHRA Registration data.</p>
+        <p>Access data from the most authoritative healthcare sources in one place. This includes NICE HealthTech guidance, ODEP Accreditation, 
+           and MHRA Registration data.</p>
       </div>
 
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ <h3 class="nhsuk-card__heading nhsuk-heading-s">Centralised evidence</h3>
         <div class="nhsuk-card nhsuk-card--clickable">
         <div class="nhsuk-card__content">
             <h3 class="nhsuk-card__heading nhsuk-heading-s">Real-world evaluations</h3>
-            <p>Read and share evaluations from NHS trusts that are using technologies in practice, and get insights beyond formal guidance.</p>
+            <p>Read and share evaluations from NHS trusts that are using technologies in practice. Get insights beyond formal guidance, with a focus on clinical outomes.</p>
         </div>
         </div>
     </li>
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Who the service is for</h2>
         "heading": "Clinicians and clinical leads",
         "headingLevel": 3,
 
-        "descriptionHtml": "<p>Review clinical evidence and real-world evaluations from other NHS trusts to inform
+        "descriptionHtml": "<p>Review clinical evidence and real-world insights from other NHS trusts to inform
             technology adoption decisions in your service.</p>"
         }) }}
     </div>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Who the service is for</h2>
 <div class="nhsuk-grid-row nhsuk-u-margin-top-7" id="data-sources">
     <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-full">
         <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Trusted data sources</h2>
-        <p class="nhsuk-body-l">This service integrates evidence from the most authoritative sources in healthcare:</p>
+        <p class="nhsuk-body-l">This service integrates data and guidance from the most authoritative sources in healthcare, including:</p>
     </div>
 </div>
 
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">
                 <path
                     d="M11.4 18.8a2 2 0 0 1-2.7.1h-.1L4 14.1a1.5 1.5 0 0 1 2.1-2L10 16l8.1-8.1a1.5 1.5 0 1 1 2.2 2l-8.9 9Z" />
             </svg>
-            NICE Medtech Guidance
+            National Institute for Health and Care Excellence (NICE)
         </h3>
 
 
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m nhsuk-u-margin-top-4">
                 <path
                     d="M11.4 18.8a2 2 0 0 1-2.7.1h-.1L4 14.1a1.5 1.5 0 0 1 2.1-2L10 16l8.1-8.1a1.5 1.5 0 1 1 2.2 2l-8.9 9Z" />
             </svg>
-            ODEP Accreditation
+            Orthopaedic Data Evaluation Panel (ODEP)
         </h3>
 
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m">
                 <path
                     d="M11.4 18.8a2 2 0 0 1-2.7.1h-.1L4 14.1a1.5 1.5 0 0 1 2.1-2L10 16l8.1-8.1a1.5 1.5 0 1 1 2.2 2l-8.9 9Z" />
             </svg>
-            NHS Trust Evaluations
+            NHS Trusts
         </h3>
 
 
@@ -171,42 +171,16 @@ <h3 class="nhsuk-heading-m nhsuk-u-margin-top-4">
                 <path
                     d="M11.4 18.8a2 2 0 0 1-2.7.1h-.1L4 14.1a1.5 1.5 0 0 1 2.1-2L10 16l8.1-8.1a1.5 1.5 0 1 1 2.2 2l-8.9 9Z" />
             </svg>
-            MHRA Registration Data
+            Medicines and Healthcare products Regulatory Agency (MHRA)
         </h3>
 
     </div>
 </div>
 
-<!-- Benefits -->
+
 <div class="nhsuk-grid-row nhsuk-u-margin-top-7">
     <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-full">
-        <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Benefits of using this service</h2>
-
-        <dl class="nhsuk-summary-list">
-            <div class="nhsuk-summary-list__row">
-                <dt class="nhsuk-summary-list__key">Enhance your research</dt>
-                <dd class="nhsuk-summary-list__value">Get easy access to centralised evidence, resources and key contact details.</dd>
-            </div>
-            <div class="nhsuk-summary-list__row">
-                <dt class="nhsuk-summary-list__key">Improve consistency</dt>
-                <dd class="nhsuk-summary-list__value">Compare evidence to encourage fair, consistent decision-making.</dd>
-            </div>
-            <div class="nhsuk-summary-list__row">
-                <dt class="nhsuk-summary-list__key">Support collaboration</dt>
-                <dd class="nhsuk-summary-list__value">Share evaluations and learn from other NHS organisations'
-                    experiences with medical technologies.</dd>
-            </div>
-            <div class="nhsuk-summary-list__row">
-                <dt class="nhsuk-summary-list__key">Increase confidence</dt>
-                <dd class="nhsuk-summary-list__value">Make evidence-based decisions backed by multiple trusted sources
-                    and peer assessments.</dd>
-            </div>
-            <div class="nhsuk-summary-list__row">
-                <dt class="nhsuk-summary-list__key">Enable value-based care</dt>
-                <dd class="nhsuk-summary-list__value">Focus on clinical outcomes and evidence rather than price alone
-                    when procuring medical technologies.</dd>
-            </div>
-        </dl>
+       
     </div>
 </div>