Merge pull request #822 from ritza-co/edit-974-device-life

974: Proofread changes, device-lifecycle-tab.mdx

Author: Nadia-JSch

docs/infrastructure-management/devices/device-lifecycle-tab.mdx

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ sidebar_position: 7
 import ThemedImage from '@theme/ThemedImage'
 import useBaseUrl from '@docusaurus/useBaseUrl'
 
-As of version 19.05 and later of the Device42 UI, the **Lifecycle Tab** is only available using the Device **Legacy** view. 
+From version 19.05 of the Device42 UI onward, the **Lifecycle Tab** is only available using the device **Legacy** view. 
 
-As of version 19.05 and later, from the device details view, the following sections that were under the **Lifecycle Tab** can be located using the right **Breakdown** panel:
+In the device details view, from version 19.05 and later, the following sections have been moved from the **Lifecycle Tab** to the right-hand **Breakdown** panel:
 - **Asset Lifecycle**
 - **Purchase/Support Info**
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The **Device QR/Barcode** field is now under the **Details** section of the devi
 
 ### Asset Lifecycle
 
-Provide the required details of **Date**, **Time**, and lifecycle **Event** to associate a new lifecycle event to the device. Optionally add an **End User** and related **Notes** and **Tags** to the event. Tags are useful for adding additional categories to manage your devices.
+Provide the required details of **Date**, **Time**, and lifecycle **Event** to associate a new lifecycle event with the device. Optionally add an **End User** and related **Notes** and **Tags** to the event. Tags are useful for adding additional categories to manage your devices.
 
 Add a new lifecycle event to the device using the **+ Add New** button. 
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Add a new lifecycle event to the device using the **+ Add New** button.
   }}
 />
 
-Some of the predefined **Events** have logic built-in. For example, you cannot choose **Checked Out** on a device or asset already checked out. Similarly, you can only select **Checked In** if the device is checked out.
+Some of the predefined **Events** have logic built in. For example, you cannot choose **Checked Out** on a device or asset already checked out. Similarly, you can only select **Checked In** if the device is checked out.
 
 To add logic to asset lifecycle **Events**, go to **Tools > Lifecycle Event Actions**.
 
@@ -111,4 +111,4 @@ Add new **Purchase/Support Info** using the **+ Add New** button.
   }}
 />
 
-See [managing purchases](infrastructure-management/accounting/purchases.mdx) for more information.
+See [managing purchases](infrastructure-management/accounting/purchases.mdx) for more information.