content updates, advocates and ideas page

Author: hmillersarah

ims-advocacy.html

@@ -301,15 +301,15 @@ <h5>IMS support</h5>
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 						<h6>Engage</h6>
 						<h1>Advocates and ideas</h1>
-						<p>Get an IMS advocate to represent you and learn how to submit ideas to the IMS team.</p>
+						<p>Get an IMS advocate to represent you. Also, submit your ideas to enhance the IMS product.</p>
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-								Request an IMS Advocate
+								Request an IMS advocate
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@@ -326,32 +326,31 @@ <h1>Advocates and ideas</h1>
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 					<h2>Who are they?</h2>
-					<p>IMS Advocates are folks that work at the IMS lab.</p>
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-								<p>IMS Developers</p>
+								<p>IMS developers</p>
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-								<p>IMS Testers</p>
+								<p>IMS testers</p>
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-								<p>IMS Level 2 support</p>
+								<p>IMS support</p>
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-								<p>IMS Product managers</p>
+								<p>IMS product managers</p>
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@@ -362,32 +361,31 @@ <h2>Who are they?</h2>
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 					<h2>What do they do?</h2>
-					<p>An IMS Advocates job is to help IMS clients.</p>
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 								<h2>1</h2>
-								<p>They are there to get you what you need to be successful with IMS.</p>
+								<p>They can help you be more successful with IMS.</p>
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 								<h2>2</h2>
-								<p>A good IMS advocate is a lobbyist for their IMS clients.</p>
+								<p>They lobby for their clients.</p>
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 								<h2>3</h2>
-								<p>IMS advocates ensure to have regular calls with their clients.</p>
+								<p>There is no cost to the client.</p>
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 								<h2>4</h2>
-								<p>IMS advocates are NOT salespeople, they don't earn commission.</p>
+								<p>They are <i>not</i> salespeople; they don't earn commissions.</p>
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@@ -402,26 +400,35 @@ <h2>Examples of advocacy</h2>
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-						<div><p>A client made their Db2 DBA in charge of IMS.</p></div>
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-							<h4 class="advocacy-action">Advocacy action</h4>
-							<p>The IMS team set up educational webinars for Db2 DBA's.</p>
+							<h4>Challenge</h4>
+							<p>A Db2 DBA needed to learn how to run IMS databases.</p>
+						</div>
+						<div>
+							<h4>Advocacy action</h4>
+							<p>Advocate assembled live and self-paced IMS database education for the client.</p>
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-						<div><p>A client requested to have a DEDB greater than 2K AREAs.</p></div>
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-							<h4 class="advocacy-action">Advocacy action</h4>
-							<p>Enhancement released to increase DEDBs storage to 9,999 AREAs.</p>
+							<h4>Challenge</h4>
+							<p>Client requested that their DEDBs have more than 2,048 areas per database.</p>
+						</div>
+						<div>
+							<h4>Advocacy action</h4>
+							<p>Advocate pushed for an enhancement to allow DEDBs to have 9,999 areas per database.</p>
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-						<div><p>A client opened a case for an issue regarding a PoC.</p></div>
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-							<h4 class="advocacy-action">Advocacy action</h4>
-							<p>Made sure to escalate the matter to get attention to the case and to get it resolved sooner.</p>
+							<h4>Challenge</h4>
+							<p>Client needed a quick turnaround for a proof of concept.</p>
+						</div>
+						<div>
+							<h4>Advocacy action</h4>
+							<p>Advocate helped escalate the requirement to resolve the situation sooner.</p>
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@@ -431,28 +438,29 @@ <h4 class="advocacy-action">Advocacy action</h4>
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 					<h2>Shape the future of IMS</h2>
-					<p>We invite you to shape the future of IMS, including product roadmaps, by submitting ideas 
-						that matter to you the most. Here's how it works:
+					<p>We invite you to shape the future of IMS, including adding input to product roadmaps, by submitting ideas 
+						that matter to you the most.
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-						<h3>Search existing ideas</h3>
-						<p>Start by searching and reviewing ideas and requests to enhance a product or service. 
-							Take a look at ideas others have posted, and add a comment, vote, or subscribe to updates on 
-							them if they matter to you. If you can't find what you are looking for.
-						</p>
+						<h3>Review ideas and post your own</h3>
+						<ol>
+							<li><p>Review existing requirements to enhance IMS.</p></li>
+							<li><p>Optional: Comment, vote, or subscribe to those enhancements.</p></li>
+							<li><p>Post an idea if it doesn't already exist.</p></li>
+							<li><p>Get feedback from the IMS team and other customers to refine your idea.</p></li>
+							<li><p>Subscribe to follow the idea through the IMS ideas process.</p></li>
+						</ol>
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 						<h3>Post your ideas</h3>
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-							<li><p>Post an idea.</p></li>
-							<li><p>Get feedback from the IMS team and other customers to refine your idea.</p></li>
-							<li><p>Follow the idea through the IMS Ideas process.</p></li>
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