Address feedback. (#38)

bluegate010 · web-flow · commit 36904e2bf69f · 2025-07-29T14:21:39.000-07:00
- s/endorsed CSR/envelope-signed CSR/
- s/endorser_keypair_id/SignerSlotIDParam/
- (for clarity) s/null-signed CSR/non-self-signed CSR/

Signed-off-by: Jeff Andersen &lt;jeffandersen@google.com&gt;
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                                     <div>
                                         <span style="background-color: transparent;">
-                                            Derivation attribute OID
+                                            Derivation
+                                        </span>
+                                    </div>
+                                    <div>
+                                        <span style="background-color: transparent;">
+                                            attribute OID
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                                         <span style="background-color: transparent;">
-                                            (Null-signed)
+                                            (Non-self-signed)
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                                         <font color="#000000" style="color: light-dark(rgb(0, 0, 0), rgb(237, 237, 237));">
-                                            Derivation attribute OID
+                                            Derivation
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+                                    <div>
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+                        Derivation...
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diff --git a/specifications/device-identity-provisioning/spec.ocp b/specifications/device-identity-provisioning/spec.ocp
